I come to leave my Poetry Train Monday comments half a week after the new Train has pulled out. Sad.
However, I’m glad to be here.
This is a real gem.
I tried playing with “forth” rather than “out”, but you are absolutely right.
Out is best. And this poem is radiant and, in me at least, induces a smile to break out across a previously tired face. Thanks. And thank you for sharing this poem, too.
Charlotte Hamrick 
Wow…Nature inspires some people to creativity. You have expressed it so well
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High praise from you, Jeeves! Thank you.
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Very nice. 🙂 Love how you’ve titled it too.
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I like it too!
a winter tale
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Thanks, ladies!
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Wowsa.
I come to leave my Poetry Train Monday comments half a week after the new Train has pulled out. Sad.
However, I’m glad to be here.
This is a real gem.
I tried playing with “forth” rather than “out”, but you are absolutely right.
Out is best. And this poem is radiant and, in me at least, induces a smile to break out across a previously tired face. Thanks. And thank you for sharing this poem, too.
Tschuess,
Chris
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Aw, thanks for your comments, Chris! You made me smile as well.
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