Altered
The song began, flowing
over my bed in gentle waves,
the breeze coming
through the window shifted
the air around me in a way
I cannot accurately describe
except it felt and smelled
like the damp saltiness of the sea
at night. The song & the scent
created moments that felt familiar
in an ancient way, as if
I was saturated in another time
or level of being, an altered state,
a cell-deep shift.
It lasted for a few moments, then
faded away with the song.
NaPoWriMo day 24 Prompt: Today, we challenge you to write your own poem that takes place at night, and describes something magical or strange that happens but that no one is awake (or around) to notice.


I know that feeling!!! And love the mystery of being “saturated in another time
or level of being, an altered state,
a cell-deep shift”š
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Thanks so much, Lynn š
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That is a perfect description of what occurs sometimes at night. Nice, Charlotte.
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Thanks for reading, Pamela š
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