12 thoughts on “Pink Roses

  1. OK.— I like it, but… something is not ok with it… cannot put my finger on it really… it started so nicely with roses and lust… but then… hmm.. have to think about it, maybe its good 🙂
    Thanks for sharing


  2. Magdalena, I like that you aren’t sure about how you feel and whether it’s “nice” or not. I want the reader to feel uncomfortable and a bit off-kilter when they read it. Your comments validate my efforts. Thanks. 🙂


  3. There’s a lot of turbulence in the opening lines, which makes the succinct finale that much more heartfelt. No matter what that beauty may carry with it: it’s ok. Tough to find five letters more complete.


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