The sky opens up,
a wet cut
spilling it’s warm fluid.
Inside, I watch
the windows fog over,
tracing absent hearts with
melancholy fingertips.
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Shared on dVerse Poets Pub, an online space where poets share their work and support each other. Today’s prompt: the dog days of summer.
Charlotte Hamrick 
a wet cut/spilling breathtaking!
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Date: Tue, 4 Aug 2015 22:37:51 +0000 To: info@tammyvitale.com
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Thanks, Tammy. xo
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Love this! “…spilling its warm fluid.” Yes!
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I admire the opening verses with the wet cut/spilling ~
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This describes a summer storm, during the heat so very well.
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Really an atmospheric write. So good to see you. Had not seen you around for a while!
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tracing absent hearts with
melancholy fingertips. wow I love that line… very atmospheric; and great details of the sky… the wet cut, spilling it’s warm fluid. I imagined an almost bodily way of downpour like blood, Brought life to this. very nice.
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Sensual, short, encompassing & noting the humidity, where the heat returns in part to steam; a clean & clever write.
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I too like the atmosphere in your poem as well as the looking out / looking in movement and all that is not said.
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oh i just love how you capture the atmosphere here – esp. in the last two lines
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Thank you all for reading and for your kind comments.
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C, this is so beautiful! xoxo
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Thanks, Rach! Your opinion means a lot. xo
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beautifully done – the best part of a summer, I’d say.
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Thank you!
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Intensely beautiful in a small package. Loved it.
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I’m so glad. Thank you!
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Rains of Dreams..
Rains of heArt..
Reins of Humidity tracing
Windowing Imagination’s
Creativity.. Emotions Spiriting
Dark and Light,,
Shades
and Colors
of in between Souls
IS what Reigns most
IN Summer Paned
Memories
of Lost
and
Found..:)
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