Missing a thing
I never had
an indifferent sun shines
scorching aloneness
the invisible brand in my blood
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Napowrimo Day 27
Missing a thing
I never had
an indifferent sun shines
scorching aloneness
the invisible brand in my blood
*****
Napowrimo Day 27
WOW! Love this! you don’t say, so it’s not from a prompt? I just love poems that leave lots of room to travel around in and imagine possibilities and this totally does that.
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using fewer words where more would just confuse. and the more times I read this poem, head to wiggly tail, I so much feel the wind in these words you used. pardon praise, but one of the best I’ve read in many a read. go to see it can be done!
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that’s “good” not “go”
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Excellent! I really like this one.
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Thank you. I was in a low mood yesterday. Better today. 😁
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Oh, good! Hope you have a great day!
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Those things leave the biggest holes. (K)
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