
Brightly you shone in the crowd,
yellow straw hat, gossamer scarf
a floating flag in the breeze stating,
“I am here!”
Saxophone and guitar notes wrapped
around your swaying body, arms reaching
for sunshine in a sea of song, feet levitating
lightheartedly, your lips the shape of a perfect
heart. You were music embodied in a five
foot two woman who spent her life caring
for others with hands that ministered
and soothed, feet that tirelessly traveled,
but on this day every year your body was yours
in a celebratory ritual as deep as the goddess,
because you were one.
***

Prompt: “Today, we’d like to challenge you to write an elegy – a poem typically written in honor or memory of someone dead. But we’d like to challenge you to write an elegy that has a hopefulness to it.”


enchanting:
Saxophone and guitar notes wrapped
around your swaying body, arms reaching
for sunshine in a sea of song, feet levitating
lightheartedly, your lips the shape of a perfect
heart.
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Thanks, Tammy!
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Fantastic!
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Thank you!
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Congratulations on being the featured poet! This is a very happy poem for an elegy!
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Thanks, Jane! It was a nice surprise this morning!
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I’ll bet!
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Great to see you featured. This is lovely. <3
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Thanks, sweetie! xo
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Congratulations on being featured poet. I can feel the scene: “Saxophone and guitar notes wrapped
around your swaying body, . . ” This is a celebration of a life.
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It is, indeed! Thank you, Merril!
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Congratulations! well deserved. (K)
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I’m in wonderful company ——> YOU! xo
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xo
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Love it. Nice one
“feet levitating lightheartedly”
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Thanks so much!
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So beautiful. Your words bring to mind such a lovely soul
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Thank you!
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What a beautiful heartwarming image. You have an incredible way with words!
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Thanks, Jasmine!
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