The earth cracks shifts, slants Breath stills Spirit sinks until all that’s left is a husk Life evaporates like a magic trick Up in the sky stars glitter Sharp pointed teeth waiting Dying leaves shivering and rattling on branches trying to hold on Trying
It's a gloomy morning here with a cold, steady rain falling. I suppose it's got me in a blue-ish mood. Not all-the-way blue, just a little bit. The current prompt on dVerse Poets Pub is to write a quadrille including the word "shivering". Merril explains that a quadrille is a poem of exactly 44 words in any style. Thanks to dVerse for providing a steady stream of great prompts, even though I don't always participate. Click here for other poems written for this prompt.
Trying to hold on…trying…you brought that sadness into your verse…very nicely done…
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Those chilly grey days add up. We’ve had more than our share recently. (K)
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You described the mood/weather perfectly. It’s just what I was feeling the other day.
Thanks for joining in, Charlotte!
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